This Malcolm X story is a much darker story then the Feross narrative. That’s not to say the Malcolm X story was not inspiring and incredibly impressive, I mean the man literally read and transcribed an entire dictionary. What I’m saying is he had to teach himself to read and write in prison while dodging guards at night so that he could continue his self created lessons. As he did this he was also developing quite a distain for “the white man.” So it’s amazing and fantastic for awaking a motivation in me, but it’s certainly no Cinderella fairytale with the light upbeat feel Feross had. Well maybe it could be one of the Grimm fairytales that always have that edge of darkness in them. That being said I got much more from this piece then the last one. I feel the style of writing is much closer to that of which I will do when it comes time to write my narrative. With Feross the layout is more like bullet points with a much more mechanical feel to the writing, where as this piece flows through beginning, middle, and end to tell a complete story and tell it as a story. This is defiantly the style I want to use. I don’t just want to tell you the facts of what and how I learned; I want to lead you through them on the same path I took to find and learn them.
Josh,
ReplyDeleteGreat job, I agree our use of a "Cinderella Story" is interesting, considering the opposing view we took when using the phrase.
I love what you wrote about Malcolm X's narrative. I agree with a lot of what you mentioned. I really agree that is is much darker than the Feross story. They still were both very motivational and inspirational stories! :)
ReplyDeleteI completely agree with taking more out of this story compared to Feross'. Malcom X puts you into his story where as Feross just told you his story. Both effective styles, but X's is definitely a better choice to model ours after.
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