My Educational Narrative: First Paragraph: Rough Draft
The impact to the back of my head
was hard and unsuspected. It immediately took me off my feet and I crashed down
onto my knees. Eyes already filling with water, my hand went to the spot I was
struck and there they met with a warm stickiness that was matting down my hair.
Knowing full well what was now running down my fingertips I still felt
compelled to look at my hands, to see if just maybe I was wrong. Through the
dizzying blur that my vision had become I could see bright crimson red smears
covering the hand, blood, and my blood. My vision dimed and tunneled the house
began to spin around me and I went from my knees down to all fours, my head
pounding. Tiny red droplets began to slip past my ears and tumble towards the
ground below. I watched them break as
they splashed down in front of me, wondering to myself what just happened. The
answer, as it turned out, was I got hit in the head with a hammer. The part I
don’t like to admit is, I got hit in the head with my own hammer. And even more
embarrassing is the fact that this was not the moment that taught me I needed
to go back to school. No to understand how I learned I needed to get myself
into college we will need to back up a little.
Wow, great opening here--you're off to a good start!
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